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ninefourteener
post Aug 5 2003, 02:27 PM
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914 club....

Get this, Scott Air Force Base is having a base-wide picnic this Friday, and I was asked to show my teener at a very small car-show for military only.

Here's the kicker..... I get the day off, but I have to write a brief, 1 page "history" on the car. I think this is because several schools will be visiting... not sure.

Anyway... I AM NOT AN EXPERT. This is what I came up with. Some things might be right, some things might be completely wrong.... but I did the best I could.

I know.. kinda stupid, but I could really use your help on this. Considering I own maybe 1 of 4 or 5 in the entire Saint Louis area, I want it to sound good.

So.. I need some constructive critisism. Text posted on the next page.............
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J P Stein
post Aug 6 2003, 02:54 PM
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Entry level AXers?.....HAH!

(had to do some minor editing here)

Lotso 914 here.

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1m 3,5L 94 CURTIS EAMES 2001 BOXSTER 55.880
2 9,9L 265 DENNIS CORNFORTH 1965 COBRA 57.057
3m LADY 194 PAM EAMES 2001 BOXSTER 57.159
4m 3,5L 14 CHUCK WEST 1974 914-6 57.176
5m 9,9L 47 KEVIN NEARY 2002 996 TURBO 58.396
6m 3,5L 4 PAUL STEIN 1974 914-6 58.4sumthin

6m 3,5L 54 DOUG BARRETT 2001 BOXSTER S 58.589
7 2,5L 95 BRIAN CLEMONS 1993 MIATA 58.629
8m 3,5L 2 JOEL SIEGERSMA 1966 911 58.849
9 3,5L 78 DONALD THOMPSON 1996 BMW M3 59.042

11 9,9L 13 ED LAPLANTE 1995 CAMARO 59.680
12 LADY 113 DONNA LAPLANTE 1995 CAMARO 59.777
13 3,5L 70 JAMES PAULSON 2004 WRX STI 60.526
14m 9,9L 165 RICK MOORE 1965 COBRA 61.022
15m 2,5L 76 CHRIS REALE 1973 914 61.139
16 3,5L 72 BRIAN DOYLE 1997 ECLIPSE 61.300
17m 4,5L 23 STEVE GERMANY 2002 996 CAB 61.421
18 2,5L 69 ALEX KNIESS 2001 INTEGRA R 61.775
19m LADY 40 NICOLE HALL 1983 911 61.917
20m 2,5L 41 GUS HALL 1972 914 61.986
21m 4,5L 28 TIM LARSEN 1997 C2S 62.130
22m 3,5L 1 DAVE NANCE 1985 911 CAB 62.227
23 3,5L 74 JOE STEIN 914-6 62.789
24m LADY 42 DANIELLE HALL 1972 914 62.822
25 9,9L 81 JOHN JOAST 2002 CORVETTEZ06 62.901
26 2,5L 75 DAVID GAAB 1989 BMW 325 62.941
27m 3,5L 66 CARY KUTTER 911 RS REPLICA 62.989
28m 3,5L 68 TONY CALVERT 1988 911 63.688
29 2,5L 728 BOB KIVISTO 1980 RX7 63.690
30m 4,5L 49 SEAN NEARY 2001 C4 63.710
31m 3,5L 61 ERIC FREEDLE 1986 911 63.765
32 LADY 87 JUDY THOMPSON 1996 M3 64.078
33m 2,5L 20 BILL MAITLAND 1973 914 64.278
34m 4,5L 48 TIM NEARY 2001 C4 64.419
35m 3,5L 8 BOB SCHATZ 1977 911S 64.464
36m 3,5L 43 CHUCK JARVIE 1994 968 64.802
37m 3,5L 60 BOB GRASSO 2000 BOXSTER 65.621
38m 3,5L 63 BART LOCANTHI 944 TURBO 66.011
39m 3,5L 62 RON PIHULAK 1986 911 66.235
40m 3,5L 50 NATHAN GRIMES 1988 911 66.415
41 3,5L 80 LARRY KNIESS 2001 BMW M3 66.815
42m 2,5L 17 HARRY DANBERG 1973 911 TARGA 67.991
43m LADY 39 SHARON HALL 1983 911 68.292
44m 2,5L 79 LARRY BRUTON 2002 MINI S 68.523
45m 2,5L 56 BRUCE ALLERT 1973 914 68.594
46m 3,5L 67 RAY GAUTHIER 968 69.248
47m 2,5L 34 JIM CHAMBERS 1974 914 69.691
48 2,5L 65 TONY KOACH BMW 2002 69.947
49m 3,5L 36 JIM AYERS 1977 911S 71.868
50m LADY 64 JENNY LOCANTHI 944 TURBO 72.452
51 3,5L 77 WON LEE 2001 BMW M3 73.499
52 9,9L 73 NORM ANDERSON 1972 240Z V-8 74.402
53m 3,5L 82 JONNY SCHWATZ 1982 911 74.700


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ninefourteener   HISTORY LESSON   Aug 5 2003, 02:27 PM
ninefourteener   The Porsche 914 was built from 1970 to 1976. It w...   Aug 5 2003, 02:28 PM
Bleyseng   Hmm, the car had electrical problems?? They stoppe...   Aug 5 2003, 04:01 PM
Alfred   Most of it sounds pretty good, IMO, but I'm no...   Aug 5 2003, 04:28 PM
Hawktel   Well Sargent, I'd add in something about the 9...   Aug 5 2003, 04:51 PM
seanery   I would add some about how popular the cars are wi...   Aug 5 2003, 04:54 PM
airsix   Some racing history details: The (private entry) ...   Aug 5 2003, 05:05 PM
Mueller   I've never seen or heard anything about them h...   Aug 5 2003, 05:05 PM
tryan   i have always heard that porsche wanted to continu...   Aug 5 2003, 05:06 PM
Lawrence914-6   Good essay, Sergeant, but it's editorial conte...   Aug 5 2003, 06:50 PM
kdfoust     Aug 5 2003, 06:54 PM
grantsfo     Aug 5 2003, 07:00 PM
Lawrence914-6  
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!   The 914 outsold the 356.....with 1/2 of the model ...   Aug 5 2003, 07:13 PM
redshift   I have been a 914 fan since they were new, and an ...   Aug 5 2003, 07:25 PM
URY914   Porsche was changing thier focus to water cooled c...   Aug 5 2003, 08:17 PM
Alfred   I think that if the 914 would've begun life as...   Aug 5 2003, 08:30 PM
tryan   nordoff sucessor was kurt lotz that pinched the ve...   Aug 5 2003, 08:44 PM
Aaron Cox   bring some of the ads with you. (i have em all) an...   Aug 5 2003, 08:47 PM
Alfred   Here's Car and Driver's review of the 73 2...   Aug 5 2003, 09:14 PM
Aaron Cox   Thanks for posting that. good article- 17 seconds ...   Aug 5 2003, 09:22 PM
Aaron Cox   here is my favorate:   Aug 5 2003, 09:24 PM
ninefourteener   To all..... THANK YOU!!!! I absol...   Aug 5 2003, 09:27 PM
Alfred     Aug 5 2003, 09:29 PM
Aaron Cox   I stole all the ads from AA. good vintage ads fo r...   Aug 5 2003, 09:30 PM
Brad Roberts   So.. after readin all the comments.. I personally...   Aug 5 2003, 10:05 PM
ThinAir914   As I've heard it VW was looking for something ...   Aug 6 2003, 12:09 AM
Alfred     Aug 6 2003, 01:05 AM
ninefourteener     Aug 6 2003, 07:49 AM
tod914   Do you have the Dr. Johnson book on the 914? That...   Aug 6 2003, 08:52 AM
ninefourteener     Aug 6 2003, 09:00 AM
Bleyseng   They were put out of production because there was ...   Aug 6 2003, 09:25 AM
ninefourteener   Nope, cant say I remember that price jump... I was...   Aug 6 2003, 09:32 AM
ArtechnikA     Aug 6 2003, 10:00 AM
tod914   http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/search-h...85382...   Aug 6 2003, 10:30 AM
Jeff Bowlsby   To clear up some earlier hearsay... In May of 197...   Aug 6 2003, 11:04 AM
J P Stein   "....a miniature sheetmetal stamping plant ......   Aug 6 2003, 12:44 PM
Alfred   I highly recommend Brian Long's book and Porsc...   Aug 6 2003, 12:44 PM
Queenie   Ok, you've heard from the tech-smarties and th...   Aug 6 2003, 01:18 PM
ninefourteener   Man...... I can't believe you actually edited ...   Aug 6 2003, 02:47 PM
J P Stein   Entry level AXers?.....HAH! (had to do some m...   Aug 6 2003, 02:54 PM


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